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This abstract provides a very detailed account of the developmetn of a new technology to assist people with a visual impairment navigate their environment. Contrasts are made with existing tchnology and a high level of detal of the new product are provided. When presenting this paper at a conference, the authors would be advised to take into account that many in thier audience would benefit from a 'plain language' presentation, minimising the use of technical jargon.
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The paper describes an interesting implementation of a prototype of an obstacle detection system. The main message of the paper is just to report the author's development of such a system adopting existing algorithm (ISM) on an available computing facility. However, the paper does not seek to elaborate or improve either the algorithm or the parallel computing implementation.
The result and discussion part gives the reader an idea of the outcome but it is far from convincing academically. More experiments should be conducted in order to give more insight to the benefit of using parallel computing since results shown in Table 2 are rather obvious and are left undiscussed.
If accepted, graphs in Figure 5 should be labeled with clear values and units.
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Interesting low cost solution to faciliate waling for the visually impaired. It ability to detect objects within the range of 5 meters is good and should be further developed
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This abstract provides a very detailed account of the developmetn of a new technology to assist people with a visual impairment navigate their environment. Contrasts are made with existing tchnology and a high level of detal of the new product are provided. When presenting this paper at a conference, the authors would be advised to take into account that many in thier audience would benefit from a 'plain language' presentation, minimising the use of technical jargon.
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The paper describes an interesting implementation of a prototype of an obstacle detection system. The main message of the paper is just to report the author's development of such a system adopting existing algorithm (ISM) on an available computing facility. However, the paper does not seek to elaborate or improve either the algorithm or the parallel computing implementation.
The result and discussion part gives the reader an idea of the outcome but it is far from convincing academically. More experiments should be conducted in order to give more insight to the benefit of using parallel computing since results shown in Table 2 are rather obvious and are left undiscussed.
If accepted, graphs in Figure 5 should be labeled with clear values and units.
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Interesting low cost solution to faciliate waling for the visually impaired. It ability to detect objects within the range of 5 meters is good and should be further developed
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